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10 Fold

10 Fold

A Poem by An Laech
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These are lyrics I wrote about 6 yrs. ago. Enjoy!!!

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God won’t save a spoiled soul
Sins burn deeper than Hell’s flame
Twisted mind…of paranoia
Head bowed down in eternal shame
Hateful child, father wasn’t there
Self-absorbed with self-abuse
Sunken eyes…showing weakness
Things been done bear no excuse
 
(Chorus)
Suffer your lies…suffer your losses
Suffer the torment, turned back on you
Suffer your lies…suffer your losses
Suffer the torment…
10 fold…
 
Rotting inside, a slow passing
A fate that is…so deserving
Seeking redemption through false love
Sucking up…to be driven away
Closed eyes, back forever turned
Words drowned down by memories of pain
Save confessions for one who’ll judge
Nothing here…nothing to gain
 
(Chorus)
 
Coming back on you…10 fold (4x)
 
Back on you…10 fold(2x)
 
God won’t save a spoiled soul
Sins burn deeper than Hell’s flame
Twisted mind…of paranoia
Head bowed down in eternal shame
 
Suffer your lies…
Suffer your losses…
Suffer…
Suffer your lies…
Suffer your losses…
Suffer…

© 2008 An Laech


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Is this song about Suffering? LOL Just Kidding Mon...I liked this for how focused the message is. Its very straight on. I've been watching some critiques of music artists recently and one of the comments was how the artist would sacrifice meaning for rhyming or sounding good. You have provided the meaning with clarity and force. So now I've got a question...perhaps it's a common one amongst metal fans, "Is this work an example of the genre or is there a component that adds/transcends the current state of the art". Art gives us opportunity to express and to discover. This song is of the express type...can you write darkness with discover?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dude, I would SO love to hear these sung. You should record yourself. :)
I love reading things written in the past. Historical my friend, historical.
"Words drowned down by memories of pain
Save confessions for one who'll judge
Nothing here�nothing to gain"
I like those verses...

Posted 11 Years Ago


"Self-absorbed with self-abuse"
Such a reality of masochism.
Nice lyrics, they flow well.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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An Laech
An Laech

Houston, TX



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I am a creature trapped in the wrong time. My heart beats for a time lost. A time that many say is fantasy but I wish to believe was once reality. A time before this technological nightmare we live in.. more..

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