As I see you, I smile

As I see you, I smile

A Poem by Meredithe

I see you first, I always do,


But when you see me, you smile.


You’re always happy to see me,


But not as happy as I am to see you.


You open your arms to me,


And I gladly insert myself between them.


I bet you don’t understand


Just how much I love you.


I know you love me too,


To some point at least.


My vision blurs,


And a single tear falls,


As I pull your now still form closer,


And let it fall to the ground.


I remove the bloodied knife from your back,


and watch as red liquid pools around you.


But as I look upon you, I smile


I can’t help it really, after all, I love you

© 2010 Meredithe

Author's Note

Probably not my best, but I felt like writing something, and this is what came out.

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the poem itself does sound a little forced but it still flows well. the imagery at the end was great. using colorful adjectives.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Awww, this made me smile. I love the overall idea for this one, great job ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on October 6, 2010
Last Updated on October 6, 2010
Tags: Friendship, Romance, Death, Love



Twin Falls, ID

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