I Remember

I Remember

A Poem by Meredithe

My list poem for creative writing.


As I sit here thinking about you, I remember:


You were scared of me at first,


You were always there for me,


You weren’t just a friend to me,


You used to come over just to see me,


You were one of the best friends I ever had,


You used to make me smile, just by being there,


And now that I think about it:


You’re the reason it didn’t work out.

© 2010 Meredithe

Author's Note

Definatly not my best, but it works, and I had to get it done.

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it is a bit stilted and the flow isn't as good as some of your other works. but the theme for the poem is good and I think with revision it could be a great poem. keep writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Wow, I like the thought you put into this one...well done :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on October 13, 2010
Last Updated on October 13, 2010



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