Love

Love

A Poem by Killer
"

I just saw a couple people kissing at my school

"

I see the way you walk to class

Do I dare to make a pass?

The only thing keeping me way form you

Is your love for another who?

I watch you walk down the hall

Is this the girl you like,Is she all?

I wonder why you don't even see me

 

I really like the way you talk

I then walk down the hall

I see you get in trouble

This has doubled

He wonders why I did this

I can't say

Its just a way

© 2010 Killer


Author's Note

Killer
I really like a guy

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I like this but I think you should fix up your ending. It seems a bit abrupt. Its sounds like you like the guy and to show him you even exist you got him in trouble. I like how you are able to get your story across in your lyrics. It's really mature for your age.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 12, 2010
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