Tell me NOW!!!

Tell me NOW!!!

A Poem by Killer
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....My song I wrote

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Crawling down the halls

Walking up the walls

Hearing the screams

What ya do to me

Seeing the blood spill

Its making me ill

 

Tell me now

How you made me go up and down?

Tell me why

You made me spy?

 

Going crazy

Sights going hazy

Lights up like a tree

What ya to me?

Hanging by a thread

Going ahead

 

 

TELL ME NOW!!!!

 

 

 

© 2010 Killer


Author's Note

Killer
Sorry about this one but an idea

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Listen to anonymouse, I'ts a good Idea.
you should start looking at your reviews.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

just needs one more line . . .
like,
"watching me fall down dead."

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I really like the idea for this... It could be really catchy... Well done!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

interesting . . .

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on October 13, 2010
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