(47) I Am Batman

I patrol in my backyard,
Cruising im my pedal car.
I can see the Joker.
Well, it's really a toy clown;
Locked safely away in the toy shed.

I am looking for Two Face,
A teddybear that my dog ripped.
So my Mum sewed up his face.
But now he is out there, free;
I must track him down.

I search for him in the kitchen,
There I spot the Scarecrow.
It is a puppet, long and thin.
I must stop in my search now,
So I can tackle with my foe.

I put the Scarecrow behind bars.
My search continues, relentless!
I see Two Face hiding in the lounge;
I now creep up, slowly behind him.
I pounce, the battle is long, but I win.

That scarred teddybear is put away,
Where he won't harm anymore toys.
My Batcave awaits, up in my bedroom.
I am sleepy, my eyes are feeling tired.
I am Batman, even I must sleep!





copyright Chris smith 2010

Reviews

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

I liked this poem as batman is my favourite vigilante
I really enjoyed the innocence to this poem

I wrote a poem about batman I hope you may read and review

called darkness is as clear as daylight

heres the link

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/%7BA%7Dshley-%7BB%7Dlack/692806/

great poem loved the flow and your story telling ability 100/100 from me

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Fun!

[Murtuza]

A really enjoyable read :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

What an adorable poem. Reminds me of my brother when he was young playing Batman and pouncing on his toys. What a joy!

[NeonWolves]

I adore this. It reminds me of my little brother running around the house. It's no innocent and cute. It made me smile. ^.^

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Ah Chris this is great .. so is Batman .. and Robin don't forget him lol
This was fun and whimsical.
I enjoyed it.

Chloe

[Coyote Poetry]

Nothing better then to have a kid imagination. War are very quick. Bad people can disappear with sleep and comfort of home. I like the complete story in the poem. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Michael Turnbull]

you are batman! where did childhood go? can i come over and play? i'll bring my matchbox cars :)

[cfix]

This is wonderful, Very enjoyable read. I liked this.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Delightful - what a wonderful whimsical tale. Thanks.
Light,
Siddartha