(47) I Am Batman

(47) I Am Batman

A Poem by Chris Smith Welshpoetcs


I patrol in my backyard,
Cruising im my pedal car.
I can see the Joker.
Well, it's really a toy clown;
Locked safely away in the toy shed.

I am looking for Two Face,
A teddybear that my dog ripped.
So my Mum sewed up his face.
But now he is out there, free;
I must track him down.

I search for him in the kitchen,
There I spot the Scarecrow.
It is a puppet, long and thin.
I must stop in my search now,
So I can tackle with my foe.

I put the Scarecrow behind bars.
My search continues, relentless!
I see Two Face hiding in the lounge;
I now creep up, slowly behind him.
I pounce, the battle is long, but I win.

That scarred teddybear is put away,
Where he won't harm anymore toys.
My Batcave awaits, up in my bedroom.
I am sleepy, my eyes are feeling tired.
I am Batman, even I must sleep!





copyright Chris smith 2010

© 2011 Chris Smith Welshpoetcs


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I liked this poem as batman is my favourite vigilante
I really enjoyed the innocence to this poem

I wrote a poem about batman I hope you may read and review

called darkness is as clear as daylight

heres the link

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/%7BA%7Dshley-%7BB%7Dlack/692806/

great poem loved the flow and your story telling ability 100/100 from me

Posted 13 Years Ago


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sweet!

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I feel like a kid again!!! great job!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I have always loved Batman! I love the whimsical imaginative mood of your poem. Excellent writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow you really made me feel like a child again. The world was so simple then. Thanks for you sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Ohh, if I had this kind of imagination again, I too would feel like conquering the world in a day. Children are an inspiration aren't they...

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this Chris its fun and put a smile on my face. You tapped into the childs feelings so well...xx I love it..x

Posted 13 Years Ago


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good job! fun and well written

Posted 13 Years Ago


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i love the playfulness of this. the play between reality and childhood fantasy is seamless and excellently executed. definitely a great piece about imagination and reminiscence.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this, it reminds me so much of the games I used to play when I was a kid, pretending to be a superhero, secret agent, witch, pirate, etc. (:

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Added on March 21, 2011
Last Updated on March 31, 2011
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Chris Smith Welshpoetcs
Chris Smith Welshpoetcs

Cardiff until 2004, then Hemel Hempstead, Hertfordshire, United Kingdom



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Started writing in 1997 after a horrible attack, I found it theraputic and wrote a range of poems and short horror stories. Started sharing on the Web firstly with Yahoo 360 in 2005, then sites on .. more..

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