Maybe in another universe

Maybe in another universe

A Poem by bluesaturn

I can still feel your hands
on my skin
and the question
echoes in my head
maybe in another universe
you didn't take
my last shred of hope from me
maybe in another universe
I'll be okay

© 2024 bluesaturn


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There seem to be a lot of those other universes, locations where the show went as planned. I say keep trying until this universe works right.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Blue,
Now THAT's a quality whine... sorrow expressed without all the purple emotions and teardrops...
Vol

Posted 1 Week Ago


your poem is emotional to be honest
it feel as though we wish for the same person who hurt you would love you in another word
a lovely writing

Posted 1 Week Ago



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Added on July 9, 2024
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