inside (unfinished)

inside (unfinished)

A Poem by carmen

Ok I wear big earrings

and a chunky pendant too

I wear gold on every finger

and i have the odd tattoo

I wear a leather jacket

and denim jeans each day

from that you made assumptions

that now won't go away

you said that i start fights in pubs

you've branded me for life

you mentioned to some people

that I look like i cause strife

you never stopped to talk to me

or tried to understand

you've made alot of judgements

and you've forced anothers hand

you poisoned them with your opinions

now they judge me too

they look at me and do not see

and thats because of you.





© 2008 carmen

Author's Note

Ok i know the endings a let down but i normally only write for my own veiwing and this is my first time letting other people see my work so please be honest...but in a gentle way!

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Personally, I enjoy it. It hits home with me and my theory of judging books by their covers. The end does need more, but I'm sure it will come to you when you quit thinking about it. Good job!

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Added on July 7, 2008



Carlisle, England

I am a student mental health nurse who writes in my spare time. I write anything and everything that comes to mind, poems, stories, songs and i often just write down my thoughts and feelings about thi.. more..

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