freedom

when one got hook up,all you get to think of is how i will be free

When i look up at others
And see the fun they gathers
Going from party to party
And looking all glitters
I wish i could be free

Just like the bird in the sky
Flying in every direction they like
Having no thought in their mind
Happily singing with a free heart
I wish i could be free

When others are having fun
I sit still thinking about my gum
What would it take me to live a fun ?
I just think i could give it a run
I wish i could be free

Reviews

[Joe W]

Freedom is certainly an interesting topic to write on and the idea of wanting to be free is much more interesting.

[freaksheet]

I relate to this so much, it's practically my biggest wish. Thank you for sharing this with me.

[zunie frost]

I can personally realate to this poem
I really wish to be free .
I love this poem every word is so simple and effective

[hcarson]

lovely poem but so sad. there are so many reasons a person may feel their freedom is restricted to the point they can't even have fun, normally it is confidence, parents or partners..but if you want it bad enough then you will get it eventually, keep your chin up and keep creating lovely poems :)

[Sangeetha]

Aww how sweet life is full of restrictions just be patient freedom will come.

[Adesanya Yewande]

i believe so too,cause there is time for everything ,surely the time for freedom will eventually emerge

[Naked Elements]

also they may appear to be free, but deep down they probably don't feel free either . . . just a thought. we're all human.

[Adesanya Yewande]

true,thanks for the comment

[Naked Elements]

I know how you feel. This has bothered me SO many times. Other people out there having all the fun . . . But the truth is you are right and they are wrong and they know it. Stay the course friend, don't give in .. . but you might . . . idk. i just listen to music and get tattoos . . . do you think that's bad? music and tattoos?

[Adesanya Yewande]

no they are not bad...if it takes you out of your boredom

[Coyote Poetry]

Life is twisted. We want to be with someone and need to be free.
"Just like the bird in the sky
Flying in every direction they like
Having no thought in their mind
Happily singing with a free heart
I wish i could be free"
I do believe the free bird become lonely. They sing the saddest songs. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Adesanya Yewande]

thanks for the comment coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Shankar Mohan Singh]

You know what? you are a very good observer a bit work with literary devices can take you far.
You may find this link helpful
http://literarydevices.net/literary-devices/

[Adesanya Yewande]

thanks i will try the link,thanks for your help