When I'm gone

Inspired by the Song "When I'm Gone" by Eminem.

When I'm gone

Just carry on

I need you to try

For their hopes to stay high

Don't do it for me

Do it for our family

I know our past

isn't the best

we've grown up so fast

to face life's test

She don't agree with the fact that I sing

or that I push her too high on the swing

I'm sorry that I'm the main source of pain

your trying so hard to me keep that tame

They are our hearts which is filled with their love 

And our bright stars that shimmer above

But all I ask is that

When I'm gone

help them carry on

I may be be crazy but

Tonight I turn Rocka-by-baby.

Reviews

[just is]

This is really direct as well. I love the part of pushing her on a swing.
This is amazing and very well written.

[Skoo.]

"When I'm gone, just carry on, don't blow every chance anytime you hear the sound of my voice..." Eminem fan much? d:
This is very good, Peggy, you are good at the poemswritings (:

[Lily Mae]

A great song and poem...x