Love is!

This is something my friend, Beth, wrote in about 5 minutes and I have to admit, I'm impressed :)

Love is like a lump of gold,

hard to get and hard to hold.

Of all the girls I've ever met

you're the one i cant forget.

I do believe that God is above,

created you for me to love.

Reviews

[just is]

Oh wow This is so good, I love this!
Simple and powerful.

[Beautiful_Nightmere]

I like this!(: Good job!

[freelancejouster]

this is so cute. i'm not much into the god thing (scene? it isn't hardly (lifestyle?)) but this is perfect and the rhyme is just impeccable. points to beth.

[gman]

it's nice of you to write me a poem but dude i'm a dude lol jk. short simple and effective nice one