Deception

Your lies pierce like knives
Pulling me down to the depths
Trapping in deceit

Reviews

[Engulfed in Flames]

I like this one, short, yet very moving and vivid.

[Davia Lynn Bradley]

maybe a tid to short for my tastes, but I like it nonetheless. it's a very accurate description of how the lies of others hurt you, stab you, drown you in pain and lost trust. very good.

[Thea M. Joy]

Oooh....I REALLY like this one! Great job! :)