Immortal Bliss

Immortal Bliss

A Poem by Ryan Daniels

Asking for assistance

From the Holy Spirit

Helping me to be fearless

To live forever more in peace

Contributed with deeds

That is joyous to see

For I believe we belong

To one tree.

Lifting this dust

And creating heaven

With the hearts that are united

Eating from the table

That is delighted

To share the spiritual treasures.

Living by the design

Not to be blind

To see the great beauty

As we pass through the portal

Knowing we are immortal

Attracting His kingdom

Tasting His fruits

That comes from a strong root

Of a wonderful bliss

That we have always wished.



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Ryan Daniels
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I haven't been very religious lately, but this was an inspiring poem about thinking of God and having some meaning of him in our life. Sorry Ryan that its taken so long for me to have the chance to read this touching poem too.

Posted 10 Years Ago

I love that I have discovered a writer with passion whose words flow so easily from the page to my own heart. I love the peace and tranquility that swept me away instantly. I could get lost reading your work for days. I'm sure you are a blessing to others like me that get caught up in the stress of day to day rushing and need to be reminded that we're all here for a greater purpose.

Posted 10 Years Ago

nice write

Posted 12 Years Ago

While I may not be mainstream into God and his workings. I did like this piece. It came across with a powerful feeling of hope and joy. Smooth in it's flow, it easily breathed it's images in the mind and heart of the reader.

Great ink!

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very lovely, i just love it

Posted 12 Years Ago

Very Lovely has much truth to it like to think we all feel this was this will go in my Favorites Thank you for sharing. God Bless

Posted 12 Years Ago

This poem prayer is reflective and heartfelt. Very nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago

very beautiful. God bless!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Hmm, that music.. how it fits nicely while I was reading, clever touch!
As for those lovely words, glad they flowed out of a person like you!
Very beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago

i like this. Oh how hreat it would be to see heaven and live in his kingdome! U expressed this very well! Great write! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on May 29, 2010
Last Updated on January 24, 2023
Tags: poetry, spiritual


Ryan Daniels
Ryan Daniels


I am a poet that likes to write about spirituality that is up lifting to the heart. I have published two poetry books! I read books from the Baha'i Faith because I am a Baha'i and enjoy creating in th.. more..


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