Burning Fire

Burning Fire

A Poem by Ryan Daniels

As I fall to my knees

I plead to peel 

From the fire that burns 

And there is no where to turn

But to the heavens above

Asking for the cup

That is full of mercy.

As I cry

My soul dives

In the ocean

Of forgiveness

Short as it may be

Life is full of dreams.

The reality of your burdens

Are free when you think

Positively! 









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A wonderful write... It flows wonderfully well...The torment is described in compelling words.. "I plead to peel from the fire that burns..wow!
As I cry my soul dives into the ocean of forgiveness...such a brilliant way of expressing the grant of salvation...and it has such a useful message at the end...
The reality of your burdens
Are free when you think
Positively!
Precious words of wisdom..great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Wonderful flow, imagery... and message. Its so sad.... but it is so uplifting at the same time.... inspirational.... :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is beautiful. Sigh.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Guess we are all guilty of negative thinking, pessimism at times! lol I am for sure!
This is wonderfully written
xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ya man collaborative Linux Ubuntu, learning to work it... Beautiful music by: Ry Guy & Sister Jan...
Friends love it, an will be back!

Posted 9 Years Ago


nice piece of work. an easy read with a true meaning at the end. You feel a sudden relief at the last bit.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very thoughtful and shows how much you ponder things, good imagery and diiscriptions, good poem. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is really good i liked it.. and i can definately say that i know how you are feeling when you wrote this.. i've been there ;'[

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A wonderful write... It flows wonderfully well...The torment is described in compelling words.. "I plead to peel from the fire that burns..wow!
As I cry my soul dives into the ocean of forgiveness...such a brilliant way of expressing the grant of salvation...and it has such a useful message at the end...
The reality of your burdens
Are free when you think
Positively!
Precious words of wisdom..great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very true. I've been in many situations, and in all of them, this has always pulled through.
Excellent way to describe such a life lesson that often takes years to learn.
~Gage Troy

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful and uplifting. I needed to be reminded of this, and you did it so eloquently. Nicely done!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on June 3, 2010
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Ryan Daniels
Ryan Daniels

Canada



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I am a poet that likes to write about spirituality that is up lifting to the heart. I have published two poetry books! I read books from the Baha'i Faith because I am a Baha'i and enjoy creating in th.. more..

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