THE DARKNESS

THE DARKNESS

A Poem by whitfit

The Darkness

by: Whitney Martinez

 

It's cold, I'm wet, the rain is pouring down

It's dark, Your gone, my feet sink through the ground

My cries, so loud, though you can't hear a sound

you won't allow yourself to hear me

but baby, baby I'm screaming

alone in the dark.

© 2008 whitfit


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emotional, and intense write. Nicely done, Whitney.

Posted 16 Years Ago


i love that poem :D
so emotional too

Posted 16 Years Ago


I really like how this poem sounds when read outloud. =o It's really intense, probably would maybe a lovely song^^ I really liked the second line the best, except it should be "you're" instead of "your" no biggie. ;) Great job with this!!! ^_^

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Grapevine, TX



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I'm Whitney. I'm 16. And my passion is all for writing. I hope to learn about this website soon, and begin writing tons of work that interest different types of people. My main goal is to write about .. more..

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A Poem by whitfit