Alone in the Dark

Alone in the Dark

A Poem by whitfitt
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I wrote this when I was sixteen. I found it on my old account and I was shocked to read such sad emotion that I was capable of writing at such a young age. I absolutely love this.

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it's cold, I'm wet, the rain is pouring down
it's dark, you're gone, my feet sink through the ground
my cries, so loud, though you don't hear a sound
you won't allow yourself to hear me
but baby, baby I'm screaming
alone in the dark

© 2011 whitfitt


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Really powerful. I love "my cries, so loud, though you don't hear a sound" saying this line aloud is so pleasing to the ear it's absurd. Very good piece!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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whitfitt

Ft. Worth, TX



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I'm Whitney. I love God, Volkswagens, stretched lobes, tattoos, piercings, cats, sleeping, writing, Tumblr, comedy movies, reading, sleeping, smiling, laughing, sleeping, being barefoot, driving, coff.. more..

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