A Poem by Jay Ligda

I put you on a pedestal

With your beautiful face

Perfect figure and silky hair

I put you on a pedestal

And then despise you for being there


Why not come down to my level

Perfection is just my projection

There is more of you to share

Meet me direct woman to man

Or, it is me that is not playing fair

© 2008 Jay Ligda

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Very nicely written poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 14 Years Ago

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The rhyming doesn't seam to add up, and the poem isn't at any matter innovative, but it should be, because this theme - love between people, emotions and interaction - has already been generously interpret with outstanding words and ideas. In this case it's only an easy few step dance in romance. Still nice and raises a bit closer to heaven.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Love the flow and rhyming in this..

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on August 1, 2008


Jay Ligda
Jay Ligda

San Francisco, CA

I mainly write as a way to clear my mind of unwanted thoughts. Most of it is too personal or rough to publish here, but here is some that I polished up to share. more..


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