Denton

The first day i met my love.

He was tall, yet still we see eye to eye;
his hair was bushy and he was skeptic,
he has never seen someone so weird.
while i have never seen any one so perfect,

He looked at me thinking of a word to say,
but he was silenced by my
smile and mysterious blackened eyes,
but i heard it all.

He grew confused,
but i grew wiser i feel he was mine,
i held his hands and we felt it,
we just sat there talking in the spirits
and he left saying only bye and expressing a life time.

Author's Note

What do u think? O.o review me just expressing the first day.

Reviews

[what-the-frick]

This is fantastic! The emotions that our eyes convey, never having to say a single word. It's magical and wonderful.

[kadian fraser]

thank u

[Kiri Nells]

Your expressions aren't only through words, but through the structure you chose. Well done, my friend. Wonderful write :)