Love is blind. Love is forever.

Love is blind. Love is forever.

A Poem by The Roommates

World without purpose, eyes incapable of tears

It all spins at an endless pace

 Days go by, days become years

And by fate, appeared your face

 

Time. Space. The world. Stopped to see

Eyes that pierce, staining the soul, me

And for a moment I break free

Forever I’d live in this moment, just be

 

Drowned by the ocean in her eyes, deep the vast blue

Blue, pure blue, beauty was given to you

With each blink, gracious defeat

Chest silenced, as the heart skips a beat

 

 If your eyes were a song

I would dance in your grace

Addicted to your rhythm

 Yet all I know is your face

 

What is here one day is gone the next

Yes memories must all eventually die

But the thing I found in the clarity of your eye

A love forever shared, between you and I

 

Love at first sight, a myth I bet

Search for love I will, or else I’ll regret

But all this is not done, just said

I love you already; though our eyes just met

 

A tear longing, but yet to come

 As your face begins to fade

Your image succumbs to shade and

My heart escapes from loves maze

As you and I go our separate ways

 

The veil has been lifted, love the eternal chase

It all spins at an endless pace

Days go by, days become years

A feeling forever missed until, your face reappears

© 2012 The Roommates


Author's Note

The Roommates
Me and my roommate decided to start wrtiting poems and since we're students we can't really post that frequently so this is a shared account. This poem was done by Wian.

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Such a nice poem with many lines I love to read again and again :) Very addicting :) You have shown such a nice poetic way of expressing your ideas that works and makes a statement as your style in writing

Well done and keep on writing!

I applaud this piece

Posted 7 Years Ago


With each blink, gracious defeat / Chest silenced, as the heart skips a beat

That is favorite part. Such a beautiful flow and a lovely idea. Wonderful job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love how this flows, how the words just seem to walk hand in hand!

I really do hope you keep up the good work, and I hope to read more soon

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love this!
Its increadbly well written, the flow is beautiful and the lines totally compliment the title.
Such a delicate descrition of love your feelings are cleary presented and written. Lovely

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very beautiful I like it alot :3

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very beautiful and rich. I love the tone behind it. I especially love the part "If your eyes were a song

I would dance in your grace

Addicted to your rhythm

Yet all I know is your face"

Well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow this is awesome!

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is wonderful...wow :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like it this beautiful poem :)
It has great flow, great rhythm, and its a amazing poem :)
Great work!
Thanks for sharing!
100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


love the creativity behind this awsome write

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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