Immortal

Immortal

A Poem by William Usry

 I am becoming

Immortal

Infallible

Indestructable

A golden_god

I am becoming

A juggernaut

My power

Stretching

To the ends of the earth

Feed me

With_sacrifices

Trust in me and

Fall

as_well

 

 

© 2009 William Usry


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dude pretty cool, your writing structure is kinda cool and overall variety of wording and feelings. good work.

-Will

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow! What an amazing poem! I really liked it! It was very well written, and greatly detailed! The words were very powerful! I really enjoyed reading your poem! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


I had a strong reaction to this. I yelled out of satisfaction.

Posted 14 Years Ago


The way you set it out is some powerful it brings a whole new meaning to the words. WOW!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like it!!! the way you typed it is ah-maz-zing.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on August 15, 2008
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William Usry
William Usry

Athens, GA



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My name is William but most people call me Luke Think Star Wars not the Bible I talk too much I'm 21 I love music I absolutely abhor coleslaw I love my family and my friends with all my heart .. more..

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