wolfman

wolfman

A Poem by quill of shadows

The moon raises golden into the early night sky

I spasm, clinch, no not tonight why!

It’s nearly reached its fullness now

I continue to fight it though I can’t fathom how 

Hhhoooooooooowwwwwwwwwwllllllll

Flailing and thrashing into knots my joints contort

From head to toe now a hairy beast it’s time to kill for sport

I disembowel my 1st victim tearing his insides out

Crimson dripping to the floor from my newly bloodstained snout

Now into his 1stborn sons sweet flesh my razor fangs sink deep

Next full moon u may raise hell my child but now it’s time to sleep

An awesome addition to my race my new wolf son will make

Sniff sniff ooo there’s more of them there lives are mine to take

All must run if they are near for they may not be saved

Till a silver bullet sends me to my tainted wolfman grave

© 2010 quill of shadows


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this reminds me of paul after all hes hairy like a wolf lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is very descriptive and creatively done. This puts a different twist on the wolfman.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A very nice werewolf tale in your poem. You created a very interesting wolfman in this and I like the descriptions you used in this for the setting and mood.

Posted 10 Years Ago


thats good

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

What a wonderful read! One thing that bothered me though is...there lives are mine... should be their lives are mine.. but other than that a wonderful write! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I though this was good.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

some parts were hard to read because of spelling but imagery and the whole creation of the wolfman you did well on..nice job

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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quill of shadows
quill of shadows

Omak, WA



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im willie ever since i was able to hold a pencle i fownd myself drawing every chance i got however in recent years iv discoverd that writing was another relevant and usfull form of exprestion and ange.. more..

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