Drips of Wisdom #7

Drips of Wisdom #7

A Chapter by Pax
"

its hard when your blind on the things that you already love without noticing it.

"

I’m such a fool not to see you,

not knowing you’re very near.

Then I realized you’re already gone.




© 2012 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
found this on my twitter its one of my tweets before.
one of my principles or should i say my understanding to everything around me.
or can be a monologue or Psychology/reflection, i will never know right?

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I'm afraid I don't really understand this piece, Will.
It would be clearer, and make a much more effective poem, if you were to simply remove the middle line.
That's the way I see it, anyway.


Posted 11 Years Ago


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AK
Happens, opportunities are close sometimes and we don't realise it until they are gone:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Pax

11 Years Ago

yeah i agree. thanks.
AK

11 Years Ago

Anytime:) I really love reading your philosophical thoughts!
The silent whispers are everywhere....

E.L.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Strange..I was just listening to Skylar's song "WORDS"...this goes with it.

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