puzzle piece

puzzle piece

A Chapter by Pax
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an old poem, i updated.

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Empty house along the way,
          stop for awhile,
             a feeling of loneliness,
                    a Missing piece in a puzzle

Alone in this dusty old place.

I adore its beauty

       it scratch a hole in my heart

          Until it wounded me wide open,

                                 leaving me totally blind and clueless

                                      of everything around me.

I tried to stay away,

  But I keep coming back

                              For -

                     just one more glance,
                                   just one more moment,
                                                                     
and one last touch.


Everything comes is just an illusion I stumble upon.
This was never mine in the first place.
Hoping against time
                          that someday,

      somewhere,

and sometime in the past

                    I'll be able to find
                                     
All together your missing pieces
                                   
In this messy and crazy puzzle piece.

I wish you were mine,
                             
just be mine….



© 2013 Pax


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For some reason as soon as I read the first line I put a tune to the entire poem and sang it in my head (better that than out loud) It gave the piece a lyrical quality, literally. I love the world this poem created for me, one of longing, of being close yet faraway. Thank you.
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Again very romantic. Which was awesome.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Wishing, wanting , ever to be.. heartbreaking...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the format you used! Very nice!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think its beautiful

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

For some reason as soon as I read the first line I put a tune to the entire poem and sang it in my head (better that than out loud) It gave the piece a lyrical quality, literally. I love the world this poem created for me, one of longing, of being close yet faraway. Thank you.
-x-

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pain can come from pining over something that was not to be. Even more than being alone, wanting/craving may be of greater sting.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Woah. Love it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

once again another great poem from you keep em coming

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very emotional... I really like this!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A nice write. All I can say is that the emotions are apparent and very nice and organized. The speaker's desires are clear and very interesting.

Keep writing :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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