Revolving Theory

Time is just an illusion

A manifestation of our creation

I often wonder the flip side of space dimension

The revolving theory of our imagination.

Author's Note

Picture prompt

Reviews

[~]

I have so often had this thought myself, Willyam. Time, though concrete because we have made it so, it purely up to our own perception. We count based on the setting of the sun and the rise of the moon, but who is to say what time actually is? Time is relative. I love this. It is somewhere between poetry and science...which I suppose is the definition of imagination. Well done, my friend.

[Pax]

thanks my friend...Yup, its indeed a big question to my inner self...but my conscious self keep using time and doesn't believe on my inner consciousness questioning and wondering...the constant debate is on..but my logical self keeps neutral...Oh my god... I'm taking nonsense..as if i have multiple personality..hehe..lol...thank you.. thank you...for listening..and reading..

[~]

Well, it made perfect sense to me...maybe we are both nuts then? lol :)

[Pax]

hehehe...lol...why do you have this little minions in your head also..?

[Brandon S. Whitten]

I prefer divine madness. 3 nuts from the same tree:)

[~]

Little minions...divine madness.....I will accept either :)

[Pax]

divine madness... i also like it...

[Coyote Poetry]

Good question came to life with the excellent poetry. I wonder what we do had any purpose sometime? Thank you for sharing your thoughts and the poetry.
Coyote

[Renée]

Photo is so cool !! I think you described it well in your writing

[Pax]

thank you so much my friend...

[RachelReaper]

Picture prompt is awesome, and your poem to go along with it fits perfectly. I love the first two lines, and it really makes me think, who came up with the concept of "time"? Who decide we need to measure time, or if time really exists at all? Very nice.

[Pax]

i don't know who invited time...i guess i never had thought of that... the poem ends up in wondering...just like my thoughts...thanks my friend..

[RachelReaper]

It had me wondering, for sure...

[Pax]

i think everyone can relate...as i read everyone's review...some question the invention of time...

[Tom]

This is fantastic. I love short, simple poems that lead you to think so much more about the meaning and possibilities beyond them. Very well crafted and a pleasure to read.

[Pax]

thanks Tom, i agree with you.. it will leads you to wonder... everything about it..

[Belle]

Four powerful lines!
The idea did not work for me, yet
I commend you Kabayan for this theory.

[Pax]

I agree to on you kabayan in some way.. as i understand your confusion or plainly didnt work... i myself doesn't agree on time is a illusion but my inner self questioning it and the revolving theory of the world..the parallel dimension if i may say...if its true or not...my inner self just expressing its wondering thoughts...
salamat ng marami kabayan..

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Imagination and blood memory blur the lines between what is real and what is an illusion. This thought seems to be universal. Well done.

[Pax]

YUP, I think it is..thank you.

[Serenity Faith]

Very elegantly told and deeply thought provoking. Time is something that is always on my mind. Whether it be the present, the past, the future, the subconcious part, or the end of it. As always...brilliant.

[Pax]

thank you so much my friend.

[Extant]

I like it. *Smile* Time can be very upsetting, there are moments where I think life would be a lot nicer without time. You do rhymes very well, Willyam.

[Pax]

thanks, I tried my best. sometimes its hard to keep up with rhyming..

[Extant]

Sometimes, sometimes you just want to put it on paper and not worry about the format.