Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5
Darkened Soul

Darkened Soul

A Chapter by Pax
"

a little dark..

"

In my darkest days, I held you beneath my warmth

You indulged me with your feverish hunger

You embraced me with your piercing emotions

You were immune to my changeable disease

I came to a realization that you were my muse

              The best rainbow I received……….

You told me that I was part of your soul

            To me you’re the fuel to my rusty engine,

                                     The energy to my thirsty being,

                         And the light of my darkened soul.



© 2012 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
i don't know what to say...
would you share your thoughts about it?

My Review

Would you like to review this Chapter?
Login | Register




Featured Review

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Mia
This is wonderful! I love the ending!
"The energy to my thirsty being,
And the light of my darken soul."
It is very evident that there is passion in this relationship and it's the kind of passion that just engulfs you. The kind of passion that’s dangerous but you just can't help yourself. Really great write!


Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pax

7 Years Ago

You got it! that was the purpose and the dark side of it. Somewhat a dangerous love affair. Thank yo.. read more
Mia

7 Years Ago

It's such a pleasure!



Reviews

You are quite the romantic. Nicely done

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a little bubble of warm emotions that burst too easily to make its reader feel the love..this wasxwonderful and packed full of passion..simply loved it:-):-):-D.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

7 Years Ago

thank you so much my friend... I'm glad you enjoyed this little booklet of mine...
Lonely Islander

7 Years Ago

:-):-):-D.
This was so beautiful. I felt the love, the stronf, ferevnt emtions run through me with warmth as I read this. Very nice job:)
God Bless

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

7 Years Ago

thanks my friend...*big smiles* im glad you felt the emotion in it...
Lost in Wonderland

7 Years Ago

no problem at all :D
the poem seemed to surroud me while i was reading
feeding me emotions and images like drugs
what a write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

7 Years Ago

*smiles* thank you...
Kerri Hart

7 Years Ago

Hahahah no problem
This is a very beautiful tribute to someone who has touched you deeply. Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, i will certainly share my thoughts on it, but first, I must ask... you did share this with the person you are writing about, didn't you? Because this poem is filled with so much emotion, and so much deep passion that I could envision everything you felt, this poem is truly spectacular.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

7 Years Ago

i wish she did, but it's all in the past now...i just reflected on it..Thank You..
You were immune to my changeable disease

Wow..you pack a powerful punch with so little words. Dark...evocative, and brilliant!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Does this mean you like the person? Just kidding. That's a pretty font you used, making it feel like a personal letter.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
.
This is very introspective, Willyam. I love the relationship you have between yourself and your soul, and how you reflect on how crucial it is for you. Great job, dear friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

1221 Views
41 Reviews
Shelved in 4 Libraries
Added on September 3, 2012
Last Updated on September 19, 2012


Author

Pax
Pax

CDO - the city of golden friendship, Philippines



About
Dear Visitor Hello there! I am Willyam Pax from the Philippines and now residing here in Saudi Arabia for work. I am not a writer but a sensitive aspiring artist who expresses himself into .. more..

Writing
Never Gone Never Gone

A Poem by Pax


Universe Universe

A Poem by Pax


Dominion Dominion

A Poem by Pax



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Darkness Creeps Darkness Creeps

A Chapter by Pax


Clarity Clarity

A Poem by Robbie~xoxo~


Black Widow Black Widow

A Poem by Muse