Darkness Creeps

Darkness Creeps

A Chapter by Pax
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Darkness creeps in the far corners of our mind,

Waiting, Waiting

 for its turn to come out.

If a pure soul is tainted with blood

Or even just a splash of it

Darkness grows

Then it’s hard for a soul to contain it.




© 2012 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
This is a deep thought of mine, blood can be a metaphor or not, it really depends on the situation.

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Some people believe darkness is to be brought out into the light and dispelled.
A process often referred to as "confession."
Entertaining or "playing with" darkness (of certain types) can be disastrous.
Perhaps, you're talking about a presence that is not, at first, fully recognized.
In any event, Will, this piece is a bit mysterious, sounds ominous and is obviously thought-provoking.
Very fine work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Pax this is so true. There is no human being not born or afflicted by this darkness or dark side. The Bible called it or refer to it differently - SIN . We inherited this darkness or sin from our great grandparents Adam and Eve. Hence we are all capable or infected by this sin or darkness. We are dark people or sinners by nature and by choice. We are not tainted by it. We are it. Its part of us since the fall of man in the Garden of Eden. It would be very impossible to contain it since we didn't even recognize or aware that its there, consciously and subconsciously. Its natural for us to think and act on it without even being bothered by it.
Here is the Good News. Jesus came to destroy this darkness, this sin that enslaves and control us by paying it with His own life. He gave us freedom to choose and to resist. Without Him living inside of us it would be impossible.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

6 Years Ago

your words my friend is a treasure itself. I thank you very much for this. I believe the dark lays d.. read more
Great piece of writing Pax ... I think faith & forgiveness is what helps contain the darkness from over taking a person...

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Pax

7 Years Ago

thank you my friend...i think so too...those two goes a long way...
a very thought provoking powm

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Souls stained with blood... darkness that cannot be contained.... sounds like an end of the world scenario. Also, this is something I've been meaning to ask you, on a less serious note, but why do you only show the top half of your face in pictures? It could be none of my business, but I was just wondering.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

7 Years Ago

hehehe...lol...maybe I'm just too shy my friend or maybe i'm just like you or others that uses only .. read more
RachelReaper

7 Years Ago

I agree with you on the privacy issue, I would never post my face on wc, there could be weirdos on h.. read more
Pax

7 Years Ago

no problem..:) im glad you asked...
Darkness does grow.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

7 Years Ago

yes it does indeed, thanks my friend.
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If a pure soul is tainted with blood
Or even just a splash of it
My fav part! 100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

7 Years Ago

Thanks my friend, i appreciate that.
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7 Years Ago

You're welcome! :)
As if its a looming depression, I like it, you can feel the sense of dread ringing through its undertone.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Pax

7 Years Ago

Thanks my friend, its a pleasure to hear your thoughts.
I think we have the potential for both dark and light thought within us all, if we let the dark thoughts grab hold it can spread I agree, it does seem easier for people to be mean than it is to be nice. Another thoughtful write Sir.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Pax

7 Years Ago

thanks my friend and your right its easier to be mean than to be nice..that's why our soul has two s.. read more
Deep and dark, indeed. :)) Good write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Pax

7 Years Ago

Salamat kaibigan..and have a nice day..

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