Contentment’s path

~~~~~a short poem for everyone's purpose...i guess..not sure so tell me your thoughts

 

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The fringes of fate frozen my fingers upon reaching you

 

………But destiny’s hands are within my grasp…

 

Then I used my mind’s free will to take hold of it and reach you

 

* Together I’ve achieved fulfilling joy with you at my side

 

.....…towards a journey to Contentment’s path…

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Author's Note

yehey...not a sad poem..or its not something sad...this is something good i guess..

Reviews

[Caradoc]

It's hopeful with just a tinge of...darkness. I like it because it is so real to me. It has a message, to strive to overcome whatever bonds "fate" might lay on you. There is fate, yes, a unique end to which we all journey, but within the wheels of that destiny, our free will lets us forge the road that takes us there. And for the few, even strive to alter that end.

That's what I get from this piece. It might not have been what you saw when you wrote it, but it is what I see when I read it. And therein lies the beauty of ultimate purpose of every art the world over.

Thanks for this.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

I truley loved reading this. An uplifting poem.

[asdarkeyesclose]

'* Together I’ve achieved fulfilling joy with you at my side'

Reading this left me feeling cheerful and optimistic. it is a gift to leave someone feeling like that. i liked that sense of reaching out to a loved one, and the emphasized phrases were delightful. fantastic.

[Geraldine]

Nice!! This is definitely something good. :)) The structure is really catchy which is good. ^^

[Castonovia]

Definitely something good, the vibrant fonts leading to the key notes of this poem are a piece of contentment indeed :)

[Annabelle Lee]

this is something very good, well done

[FJ Davis]

Heartfelt, Pax, and decidedly unique.

[Brittany DeFranco]

I can tell it was something good, you choose something along you path through life and it made you happy ^_^
Good write!!

[Pax]

thank you.

[captain]

very colorful...and creatively written..well done Pax.

[Brandon Mathis]

wow man that's really good keep it up

[dark light]

I like the colorful structure of this poem
nice poem I love it :)

[Pax]

thank you my friend...I really appreciate your review...