I hate sadness

~ I am musing with the world's sadness, a reflections of my own as well...

 

 

 

 

 

I hate sadness

 

It makes me look weak,             

                        My tears leaks…            

                My eyes is sore           

        My heart is a bore           

  and My body repeats a painful encore.              

 

                  I dust away the sad memories,                                        

But it comes along like it’s my adversaries.                   

 

I hate sadness

It shakes my reality, a piercing faithfulness

                Towards my soulful unhappiness.

 

I don’t need help,

But in truth I am lying to myself.

 

You’ll never know, what comes and goes

Yet I am stuck between my toes.

 

I hunger for that light

But all that comes is my arresting night

 

Perhaps I am doom with my own gloominess.

Starvation and Weariness

                   Is a consolation of my messiness

A choice with laziness,

         To ponder, and wonder

                    To the world’s unending sadness.

Author's Note

perhaps anyone can relate to this kind of sadness, i guess we all go through with it... it's just that i am still stuck with it...

I have just shown my old face...
that's the old me...
I rarely used my full pic, but here i am...
maybe because that's just the nice facade , the reality is that....
this person in the photo is a stranger... :(

I have shown my full pic coz i want you my friends to know I am as real as what i have written... that this is the me who have been here for almost two years now...

all of my writes is a piece of me, & a fragment of my soul... so i am thankful to all who have read me and my journey...

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

You are one of the unique writers and poets, who shows the "real self" and makes observation of his own feeling in very profound way! I like that strong emotions and honesty for our own personality. It`s something many people lack, to see direct in the mirror as so many painters in the past...I love that in you, even the source of inspiration is so darken and full of gloom..but many times after that the light is coming! We have to live this darkness behind, as in the moment of life...all is directed to the light...I started to think about the phrase :
I hate sadness
It shakes my reality, a piercing faithfulness
Towards my soulful unhappiness.

"Soulful unhappiness" is like living source of pain...but will u wish to be "soulless happiness" ? (if that is possible) such antagonistic feelings abide in many souls, just we have to overcome them, that how we have our "past"...The world has so much sadness, as the hell is empty of it :) so here is our redemption. (I like this photo :)

:: nour ::
:: September-013 ::

[Pax]

wow, i am speechless.... thank you very much sweet friend...

[Great Aunt Astri]

You write sensitively about the sadness. Lots of us suffer from the 'arresting night'. I suppose the answer is to enjoy the light when we get a glimpse of it.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Sadness, a tricky phenomena to tackle and to overcome when so fervently overwhelming, as depicted in your writing which has an artful essence to it, I like the way your sentences drop down the page, which enhances engagement, great work, here.

[sivan]

sadness... i hate sadness too!!! i write much like you with pieces of me entwined in the words... nice piece

[Babe Roxx]

A really cool pic of you, Pax...yes, sadness and sorrow, I believe everyone feels which can cause bouts of depression...it could be financial...a living situation...loss of love...it's a storm we weather. :)

The rhyme scheme is on par...the cadence and rhythm is good. :)

[Mia]

Persisting sadness is most certainly the world’s problem. But to know sadness means you now happiness and it is a place you can once again find, in time. The time, the waiting is the worst part, but the end goal is there for you. I deeply hope you get there!!

[Shep]

As always awesome write. pierces our soul, then again i don't have one or a heart according to most people. Some call me a dirty old man or worse, believe me there are worst names a person can call me. My favorite is broken down soul-less man w***e. So I take it and let them call me anything they like. being a sad lonely old man is far better. Cool pic at least some i know is being honest hard to find these days trust me.

[Cole Hayley]

Don't we all? But overall man great job. You really let us dive deep into your sadness, and its "unending", like the poem it keeps going down into itself

[Baby Ricochet]

Great rhymes and write Mr Pax. It's great to see you as always