Darkness III

My heart fell
from the sky
down to the
darkness
it fall.

Now i got used
to not seeing
much of 
anything
despite
the dimness
of the faint light 
i still have.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I do understand this poem. when we open doors of the heart, opportunity to know sadness. Powerful and wonderful words shared my friend.
Coyote

[Jimmy Yetts]

Not wanting to see completes the blindness.
Powerful piece!

[Weeping willow]

Within the shadows dim light still shines,Good expression;-]

[Corset]

we must light our own way, today, I bought myself flowers :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You still have that light and that is hope.

[Pax]

Thanks, pretty friend.

[gabrielle]

On a moonless night
I always look for the stars
Like i count my blessings
In my darkest night. :) :) :)

[Pax]

Tahnks gab....a very positive reponsive piece...