Universe

Universe

A Poem by Pax
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In your palm, there’s a Universe

with your own time, and space

Life of a dream within the dream

An expansion to your ever changing heart

Living free to the inhabitants of the world

Cleanse from there darkly desires.

 

I simply marvel…

 

© 2019 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
writing prompt #6
photo is take and edited by me (sole owner,hehe)

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Such few words that flow into a beautiful picture ;-]

Posted 5 Months Ago


Loving the words flowing, and your image glowing. Everything flows together into the most marvelous world.. magnificent.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful poem, marvelous thoughts. You bring mystery out to marvel at. You send our imaginations soaring high. You make us live the dream.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hi Pax! I love the sparkle and mystery of the photo...and your poem have the same feeling, deep, touching hidden strings in me, specially "cleanse from there darkly desires"
:)


Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was so incredibly beautiful and freeing to read...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

even if on the outside things have become bleak...we can still have our own hope and heart deep inside. Yes.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Both photo and poem radiate beauty.
Your deep thoughts, Pax, make for a most enjoyable read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 1, 2019
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Pax
Pax

CDO - the city of golden friendship, Philippines



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Dear Visitor Hello there! I am Willyam Pax from the Philippines and now residing here in Saudi Arabia for work. I am not a writer but a sensitive aspiring artist who expresses himself into .. more..

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