Universe

Universe

A Poem by Pax
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In your palm, there’s a Universe

with your own time, and space

Life of a dream within the dream

An expansion to your ever changing heart

Living free to the inhabitants of the world

Cleanse from their darkly desires.

 

I simply marvel…

 

© 2020 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
writing prompt #6
photo is take and edited by me (sole owner,hehe)

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I think the word "cleanse" in the write should be "clean" or "cleansed" to give the structure a coherent flow. I like the content and the message of freedom and innocence contained in the lines.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such few words that flow into a beautiful picture ;-]

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loving the words flowing, and your image glowing. Everything flows together into the most marvelous world.. magnificent.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful poem, marvelous thoughts. You bring mystery out to marvel at. You send our imaginations soaring high. You make us live the dream.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hi Pax! I love the sparkle and mystery of the photo...and your poem have the same feeling, deep, touching hidden strings in me, specially "cleanse from there darkly desires"
:)


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was so incredibly beautiful and freeing to read...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

even if on the outside things have become bleak...we can still have our own hope and heart deep inside. Yes.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Both photo and poem radiate beauty.
Your deep thoughts, Pax, make for a most enjoyable read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 1, 2019
Last Updated on April 3, 2020
Tags: #universe #pax #peace #love #pal

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Pax
Pax

CDO - the city of golden friendship, Philippines



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