Never Gone

Never Gone

A Poem by Pax
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A quote

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I was never gone,
yet I was not even seen

© 2019 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
How could you ever love me
If you still never see me.

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This little piece made me think more...
Yet I was not even seen"
The way to feel invisible to someone, or to a place, for a period of time...Is that a bad feeling or good?
Invisiblility doesnt mean being ignored, as it depends also on the person himself. (or?) Sometimes I want to be invisible in the crowds...And love cant depend on seeing, but on more complicated feelings...
Oh the question is do you want to be seen?


Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wretched way to feel.
One-way love is like that.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You never know, they sense you even if they don't see you... I know, because I sense them all.
Nicely penned, Pax.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Similar to the proverbial tree falling in the forest does it make a sound if no ones there to hear it

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh Pax!
So much heartbreak in these few words. I think we’ve all feel this sometime in our lives.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple and effective. I like the vulnerable nature of this poem.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem tells me that love depends on seeing, on witnessing and on feeling the existence for broader terms. Like someone said, seeing is believing and you go further and say, seeing reality is loving. You are philosophical my dear friend.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

For those who don't seek for attention, this is a good feeling. 😊😊😊

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

which is as good as feeling gone...
i have felt this.
j.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This little piece made me think more...
Yet I was not even seen"
The way to feel invisible to someone, or to a place, for a period of time...Is that a bad feeling or good?
Invisiblility doesnt mean being ignored, as it depends also on the person himself. (or?) Sometimes I want to be invisible in the crowds...And love cant depend on seeing, but on more complicated feelings...
Oh the question is do you want to be seen?


Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

True and honest words. Being a ghost, leave us in a destine place. Great use of words my friend.
Coyote

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 17, 2019
Last Updated on April 17, 2019
Tags: #nevergone, #never, #gone, #love= #unrequited, #pax

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Pax
Pax

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