uncharted territory

uncharted territory

A Poem by Pax
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I Sense your

 morning movement

 as you wrap

 your sweetest embrace

 into my cold heart

 bringing heat

 to my uncharted

 territory

 I surrender…

 

I rave at your arrival

 as you drain

 my pool of

 longing then

 satisfying

 my hunger

 forever

 I remember…

© 2020 Pax


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Beautifully surrendered in poetry and heart here...truly lovely Pax...memories give warmth and a reason at times..this is so nicely woven in thought and tender expression :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


beautifully sensual and tastefully rendered wrapping us up in the warm glow of your writing this morning! :D

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Intensely romantic; indeed, elegant eroticism.
Stunning portrayal.
Very nicely done, Pax!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very sensual without being blatant...this is like a figurative making love.
Makes for beautiful mornings and warm hearts with which to wake.
j.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Pax
Pax

CDO - the city of golden friendship, Philippines



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Dear Visitor Hello there! I am Willyam Pax from the Philippines and now residing here in Saudi Arabia for work. I am not a writer but a sensitive aspiring artist who expresses himself into .. more..

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