All these people

All these people

A Poem by Pax
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If all these people hated me
will you hate me as well?

If all these people laugh at me
will you laugh with them?

If all these people left me stranded
will you leave me as well?

Well, everything is left unsaid

© 2020 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
I hope someone knew
deep inside iM hurting myself

Sorry dramatic isn't it, sometimes this feelings comes and goes, i just want to put it out there like its nothing, like crying alone is a regular thing.. Sigh..

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A hard truth to life that indeed some would but one must not forget that some would not either :) A lot of pain within this and the feeling of despair is poised tensely...never devalue yourself and always remember your worth, it is not based on other's opinions, hard to do but true :) Blessings Pax...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I asked the same questions many time. I learn. We must save ourselves. I do believe. We must mercy and be kind to the people in need. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pain inside is hard to heal, may your words bring some light to you. ;-}

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"If all these people hated me
will you hate me as well?

If all these people laugh at me
will you laugh with them?

If all these people left me stranded
will you leave me as well?

Well, everything is left unsaid"

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hey Paxy, no need to concern yourself with the crowd-pleaser. If they can't form their own opinions then maybe they aren't worth worrying about. was thinking of you. I hope you are hanging in there.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I will stand by you; brother to brother, poet to poet. Be blessed.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Many times people follow others lead mindlessly and need to open their eyes and form and opinion of their own. Reminds me of high school drama

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This a good one.. I love it !!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tough one, you find out in life and usually pretty quickly, the ones who stick by you.
In the long run, this will save your life.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is something I strongly relate to. There have been times I've cried on the inside at the cruelty of those that join together at my expense.

Good writing, Pax.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I hope you're doing well now! The poem is short but the message is direct. This is great!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Pax
Pax

CDO - the city of golden friendship, Philippines



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