Alone

Alone

A Poem by Pax
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its always darkest before the dawn..

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© 2014 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
the picture is not mine its a stock photo
but the words are my creation.


I feel so alone again
I feel so empty yet again
in this safe haven... sigh...

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Words, in and of themselves, are simple manipulation of the vocal cords, clicks and ticks of syllables, a phonetic energy of the tongue coupled with a reasoning brain. But when words are chained together in a specific, articulate and powerful way, they bespeak a response unspoken, heartfelt, poignantly sad and touchingly beautiful... they create art.
You have done that here, with three simple lines and a photo. I bow, humbled...

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Pax

11 Years Ago

wow, thank you for that great complement. I always love art. Im really honored by your review.



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Artistic in its form. Don't need much everytime to say alot. It has lots of feeling. Short but to the point. Like they say (if I have this right) speak softly and carry a big stick. Superb!


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are such a creative soul! Passion, silently laid out into words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

11 Years Ago

thank you, creativeness is really hard to follow but we do our best to cope up with it....
Powerful image mingled so perfectly with your profound thoughts. I have known this place too well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

11 Years Ago

thank you so much, its indeed personal and alot can relate.
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This is touching, sad, and poetically strong :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

11 Years Ago

thank you very much
Artful presentation! Gentle yet, powerful ...sad yet, somehow stated without the feeling of self-pity. These are such true and heartfelt words, and they express so well what many of us have felt all too often. Great work, Willyam! And truly, the combination of your choice of picture and your words makes the sum greater than its parts - you are an artist and a beautiful soul.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

11 Years Ago

thank you, sometimes im hesitant to call myself an artist..because i still have a long way to go. yo.. read more
The words can not be described.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thirteen words that speaks volumes about each and every one of us. We all say that we are different because of oh so many things, height, weight, age, race, beliefs... those words WillyamPax have shown why we are more alike than not.

We all feel insecure and the results of it is never for our own good. Being alone sometimes seems better, but after trying it for a while the mind deteriorates. Your words hold an incredible amounts of energy. You have penned well!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pax

11 Years Ago

Thank You, Your words of are inspiring and true.
I hope the dawn comes soon! A solitary existence is a hard thing to maintain for a long period without losing your sanity. Great writing, Willyam!


Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pax

11 Years Ago

thank you so much my friend.
Three lines written yet a multitude of emotion behind them. Some of us would long to have such a skill - i certainly would. These are words to remember, sad though they are.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pax

11 Years Ago

wow, that certainly is great number of emotions. Thank You.
emmajoy

11 Years Ago

smiling .. tis a great post.

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Dear Visitor Hello there! I am Willyam Pax from the Philippines and now residing here in Saudi Arabia for work. I am not a writer but a sensitive aspiring artist who expresses himself into .. more..

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