Alone

its always darkest before the dawn..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

the picture is not mine its a stock photo
but the words are my creation.


I feel so alone again
I feel so empty yet again
in this safe haven... sigh...

Reviews

[Dean Kuch®]

Words, in and of themselves, are simple manipulation of the vocal cords, clicks and ticks of syllables, a phonetic energy of the tongue coupled with a reasoning brain. But when words are chained together in a specific, articulate and powerful way, they bespeak a response unspoken, heartfelt, poignantly sad and touchingly beautiful... they create art.
You have done that here, with three simple lines and a photo. I bow, humbled...

[Pax]

wow, thank you for that great complement. I always love art. Im really honored by your review.

[FJ Davis]

Dramatically expressed and artfully presented.
Usually, when someone craves solitude and lack of stimulation--and doesn't wish those conditions to be disturbed (by any "insecurity") that person is recovering from something.
If true, Will, I hope your recovery is quick and complete.
Creative little work!

[Pax]

Wow, thanks. It can be manage now...

[Admiral Kirk]

Beautifully put, my friend... Couldn't be done better. The words have a lot more to them than what's written on the screen, I can tell. Powerful piece, great job!

[Kaya]

So few words, but they paint such a hauntingly familiar picture. I know it well.

[Barbara Walker]

The picture and the words speak of a stark reality. It's not something that would comfort anyone, that's for sure!

[Persephone]

Haunting, enjoyed the contrast here, quite deep, liked this very much :)

[Pax]

Thanks, greatly appreciated.

[Ama May Cooper]

What haunted words.
Short but very very very powerful ... filled with a very lonely kind of sadness.
Loved it

[Pax]

thank U

[Serenity Faith]

I loved the way you did this! Dark as always though :( I hope one day you write a poem with that light bulb bright and shining. But of course, some of the most great writes comes from dark emotion. Very well done Willyam.

[Pax]

i do want to...someday..sometime...soon...thanks,..

[Jamal]

how depressingly insightful

[Pax]

thank You.

[afra]

beautiful and powerful .....good job

[Pax]

thank You

[That_Girl]

Your words are beautifully said. Three small lines that speak volumes. Nice.

[Pax]

i do...glad u like it and thank U.