the ocean

the ocean

A Poem by obvious pseudonym
"

the greatest storm in the ocean dosen't prevent the regular incoming and outgoing tides. -Raymond Charles Barker

"

The ocean

Flows

Dances

Waves

Drifts

 

The ocean

Crashes

Pulls

Drags

Storms

 

The ocean

Shines

Glistens

Sings

Supports

 

The ocean

Drowns

Eats

kKlls

Tortures

 

The ocean

Sounds

A lot

Like

Life

© 2012 obvious pseudonym


Author's Note

obvious pseudonym
the ocean kills and lives just like life. just got back from hampton that's my inspiration.

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This is beautiful C:

Posted 8 Years Ago


Simplicity and regarded wording, well penned, a good read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wonderful descriptive words. I like the repetition of the ocean, almost like waves coming in, one after the other. Did you mean "drowns"? The comparison of something so vast as the ocean to life is awesome as well. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's all true, though. Every word of it. Life is always killing and saving, just like the ocean.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on July 23, 2011
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wherever i want, time machine you know, NH



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