have you ever- part two

have you ever- part two

A Poem by obvious pseudonym

i'm not sending out read requests or forcing you to but go back and read the first one first. then this one will make you feel better


have you ever

danced in the rain

the drops coming down

licking your skin


have you ever

done something

you thought you couldn't

it feels so good


have you ever

popped bubble wrap

it's so childish

but sooo entertaining


have you ever

finished a book series

kind of sad

but nice also


have you ever

gone off a rope swing

the wind through your hair

and the big splash below


have you ever

changed up your look

enjoying the complements

and feel so refreshed


have you ever

made a new friend

the feeling so great

you can't help but smile


i have

© 2011 obvious pseudonym

Author's Note

obvious pseudonym
i personally like this one better. the first one, i'm better now and have been for a while, just sometimes the memories get...overwhelming. so if i start staring into the distance and you ask me whats wrong or what are you looking at and i respond "just thinking" now you no what i'm thinking of

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Awww, that was such a sweet poem! I have actually done most if not all of these things, and its nice to know that I'm not the only one who appreciates the little things in life.

I'm glad to know that you're feeling better. As always, I'm always here to talk if you so choose to.

~Joselyn. (yes I spelled my name wrong on purpose.)

Posted 8 Years Ago

i have

hello, new friend :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Indeed, I have, with wisps of favour and delight! well done

Posted 8 Years Ago

I have too......love that bubble wrap!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Yay for happiness!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Love how you wrote this

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on August 25, 2011
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obvious pseudonym
obvious pseudonym

wherever i want, time machine you know, NH

so theres this fancy smancy little about me thingy on here that i have absolutly no idea what to write on sooo im just going to ramble and ramble because thats what i do best..... P.S. if you spam me.. more..


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