Dream Land

Dream Land

A Poem by obvious pseudonym
"

the higher your IQ the more you dream

"

Why don't you come

Come away with me

just close your eyes

And fall asleep

Drift away

Across the sky

In your dreams

You can fly

Fly far away

Never to return

To the land of the day

 

There you lay

Here you play

The songs we sing

All sound the same

To us recite

To you entice

Wind will blow

Away the rows

 

The doors now open

You can see

What awaits you

Come and can take a peek

We invite you come

Step further into

The land of sleep

 

But beware

For the price is steep

If you lose track

Of what's reality

And what's the dream

 

 

 

 

 

© 2011 obvious pseudonym


Author's Note

obvious pseudonym
please once again excuse my grammer it's horrible.
theyr suppossed to be a picture but my computer is being stuuupid

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Hey, Look! The only error I can find is your Note. Everyone please note: THERE IS NO E IN GRAMMAR!! I saw not one problem. Very nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Actually, for once in your life, I couldn't pick out any grammar mistakes on the way through the first time. Bravo. :)

I liked how everything SEEMED to ryhme (sp?) even though some of it didn't. It's the type of poem you'd read at one of those poetry clubs and the audience snaps and stuff. Rolls off of your tongue and sounds pretty. BRILLIANT.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Actually, for once in your life, I couldn't pick out any grammar mistakes on the way through the first time. Bravo. :)

I liked how everything SEEMED to ryhme (sp?) even though some of it didn't. It's the type of poem you'd read at one of those poetry clubs and the audience snaps and stuff. Rolls off of your tongue and sounds pretty. BRILLIANT.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice...
very...ghetto, loljk. It's...nice.
KIND OF COOL AND MYSTICAL.
XD
ignore me, i'm sugar high

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on December 2, 2011
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wherever i want, time machine you know, NH



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