"Feeling Elephant"

"Feeling Elephant"

A Poem by MarkGMelvin

Nothing is protected when my physical is in demand

Nothing is unwanted all is accepted when I command

Traitors are left captives are abused

My face makes you race

My mind is your muse


Abased on my arrival

Niceness is my rival

horrified by disobedience

you walk tender for survival


Arrogance my companion

pleading is in your eyes

awaiting your confusion

indifference is your find


Your loyalty you give

My loyalty I keep

I gain power from your fear

serve me for you are weak

"Feeling Elepahnt"

peace
wmmelvin
 

© 2009 MarkGMelvin


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What a great title. I had to read it. 'My mind is your muse' bosses my eye as I often think the mind is the sexiest part of any of us. The fear-power balance intrigues as I assume there is some erotic play in progress here. There is a strong sense of a rooster strutting his stuff. But then that is exactly what roosters are supposed to do, that the best rooster may win. Enjoyed the read.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I love the title too. I had to read the poem after seeing the title. And the poem is powerful and well written, great job...

Posted 14 Years Ago


The feeling of power and dominance. And of course the elephant new forgets. A force to be reckoned with and shows no pity if crossed. Hmm, the bull elepjant at that. Ruler of the herd. Yet a loner. Powerful writing from deep thinking pen.

Posted 14 Years Ago


What a great title. I had to read it. 'My mind is your muse' bosses my eye as I often think the mind is the sexiest part of any of us. The fear-power balance intrigues as I assume there is some erotic play in progress here. There is a strong sense of a rooster strutting his stuff. But then that is exactly what roosters are supposed to do, that the best rooster may win. Enjoyed the read.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a feeling write here.
Wonderfully written and expressed.
I like what you have penned.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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MarkGMelvin

Fabulous Las Vegas , NV



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