the purple eyed people

the purple eyed people

A Poem by wolfshrew
"

for we are the fighters

"
punch down, turn around, stop.
look me in the eye
feel the feelers, the potatoe peelers
and everything in between
mud pies and filtered tries and prairie dogs with wings!
loving lessons filled with discretion for the young
and little things
we sing we sigh we surely cry
for everything and nothing

tight rope walkers stare down defaulters
with every little try
to keep you knocking
and keep you socking at already purple eyes

© 2009 wolfshrew


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Interesting !

Could we meet somewhere, just so
you could explain this to me.

Rated 100 %

---- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

different to be sure..but i like it

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it...very creative.
Great Job

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is creative, original and fresh! Have you thought about writing children's books? Your word play is amazing and brillant.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your way with words is something I envy. I simply love the way this flows so well and says so much in such short a write. Amazing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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wolfshrew
wolfshrew

Portland, IA



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