What Shes Like

What Shes Like

A by wolfsshadow25

This is for the girl for me.

Her personality, one of a kind, never trys to be something shes not.

Her simle, brakes though the clouds and shines light on my bad days.

Shes beautiful in all the right ways.

Her laugh, makes me smile no matter what kind of day im having.

Her ka snort when she laughs makes me giggle.


She has that smile that will never leave my mind.

She the last one i talk to before i sleep.

Shes the first i think about when i wake.

When she text me i hear her voice as if hse right next to me.

When i lost my friends she filled that void in my person.

She live too far away.

So I try to fill that viod and nothing can fill it like she can.

This is want the gril for me is like.

 

 

 

 

 

© 2009 wolfsshadow25


Author's Note

wolfsshadow25
dont comment this please you know who you are..... to all those who don't know comment away....

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YOu really your love and longing

Posted 14 Years Ago


really sweet poem, very emotional. it really shows how much you like this girl.
great job!

Akina

Posted 14 Years Ago


i forgot to add something to my review earlier....
u say she was there for u after jay n liz died...she wasnt the only one...
other ppl did try to b there for u...its just u never take ppl's help even when they care about u and only want u to b ok....

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow...this is nicely written even though i kno who its about and ya it makes me sad to think that i use to b that girl but i still have to admit this was a nice poem.....*trying to b a nice friend give me a break for commenting*

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 21, 2009

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wolfsshadow25
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my name is Deven, and i write because of a friend who got me back into writing. She means alot to and i cant wait to see her again just to say good bye.... i know it will be hard for us but hay im not.. more..

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