Back to Innocence

Back to Innocence

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

or the return to........ (Enigma)


as I age

closer to
my ice age
spring memories
spring back to mind


of flowering innocence

days when
squeaking seesaws were the thrill

and the heart swings
with the swing


smiling now
in hope

that like some


I flower


to innocence

© 2012 Wondering Mind

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i think this could happen or remain in one's imagination. it's nice to reminisce about the times of innocence but unfortunately we could never go back.

Posted 9 Years Ago

What a sweet write! . I think people are continuously petal at a time..and seesaws..who says they are just for children ( :

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is a very nice poem "flowering innocence" Don't we all wish to go back to our childhood? Thanks for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago

This made me smile with my own childhood memories and carefree days...just as I now watch my daughter experiencing them. If we only knew then what we know now.

Suggestion: seasaws or seesaws?

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wondering Mind

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading, and for your kind correction :)
you are just making me look bad, what I said in 1000 you said in 100 and did it better, lol.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wondering Mind

9 Years Ago

Bad? In a good way... Your poetic style is adimrable my friend

9 Years Ago

aww thanks friend
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indeed true, our memories springs back to mind like a swing and Reminisce the innocence of our good old days. great work my friend

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on July 7, 2012
Last Updated on July 9, 2012

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