Firstborn

Firstborn

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
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not the digital agency

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though soft and tender
the heart refuses
to be conquered

but may
in strong will surrender

 

mine
I give in essence
and will not assume yours

 

instead
like an expecting mother
I lovingly wait
for my firstborn

 



© 2012 Wondering Mind


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Stunning! Absolutely stunning!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Strong & tender
Freewill........
the greatest of these is Love...


Posted 8 Years Ago


This is so Sweet!...though strong willed, in essence surrendering to a soft and tender heart comes natural...especially firstborn. Beautiful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


The heart refuses to be conquered
but may
Well penned.

Posted 8 Years Ago


so beautiful

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

in the eyes of the beholder :)
Emily B

8 Years Ago

the corinthians tells us: Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is .. read more
Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

Thank you Emily...The closest that came to mind to the purity of Love which you have mentioned was t.. read more
i guess your love must grow into one another which takes patience and nurturing. it is selfless to say 'i give in essence and will not assume yours.'

Posted 8 Years Ago


You know, I've read this over several times, and I have come to the conclusion that this is quite beautiful actually.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

Thanks...I didn't want to put on too much make up :)
Beautifully written, I like the structure and flow of this one :)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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