Aurora

aurora brilliance
his charge pulled by her magnet
love lit luminous

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

I love haiku's this is wonderful

[Shannon]

Fascinating personification here. Love story that creates brilliance.

[Wondering Mind]

Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to review this oldie

[Shannon]

I didn't check the date. Just first haiku listed. I have to confess the title did appeal.
Is there any specific piece you would like me to read?

[Wondering Mind]

Thanks again. Sometime, when you have time, I would appreciate if you read 'Daffodils and Narcissus'
Daffodils and Narcissus

[Shannon]

Where can I find it?

[Wondering Mind]

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/wonderingmind/626983/ Is the link

[EileenMarie]

Beautifully put!

[Lena Rossmore]

so vivid. amazing.

[Renée]

Your words are like a dance of Passion igniting the sky... Nature, 5-7-5 Haiku ?

[FJ Davis]

One truly lovely metaphor portraying strong romantic connection.
A finely polished gem, WM!

[Wondering Mind]

I've seen the light display in a cosmic dance, Frank...It can be no other thing than love between Earth and Sun...Thanks for your words

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Quickly brilliant! Like a shooting star...you are :)

[Wondering Mind]

Thank you Lynn, I hope I won't fade quicker :)

[Corset]

ah nice, love the visuals of the aurora this gives!

[Ed Hart]

aurorasaurus
luscious luminosity
lively life lit leap

[Wondering Mind]

It's amazing how words allow you to play with them like that, ed... Thanks for reading