Same But Different

Same But Different

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
"

Go figure, even 2 made it, but the odd one failed the prime test

"

wholly not holy
I'm sure

but I am whole
both body and soul

 

not a sum-one
of parts
but the product of a past
a present in a present
exponent of an eager future

 

myself
more than I and me

 

one
of many same ones

but one day
a different memory



© 2012 Wondering Mind


My Review

Would you like to review this Chapter?
Login | Register




Reviews

very like eastern philosophy. i feel like i have a been a completely different person in each phase of my life that i question who am i today. i guess you have to live in the present moment because the past no longer exist and the future doesn't exist yet and we should let us feel the way we feel about ourselves as we do we do now. i'm just expostulating out loud. this is a very thought-provoking poem to me.

Posted 8 Years Ago


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Pax
another deep poem, i see 3 different views but all the same just different ways i think.. ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is beautiful. So inspirational!!! Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


i like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
...
Art! That's what this is. The poem and the poet :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love the first stanza, this sounds like a very qualified self analysis, where you came out on top, two out of three isn't bad is it?

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this. It makes you think a little as you consume the words, yet it holds a nice simple message. The flow of this poem is also quite phenomenal. Great write! (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


Simple but very effective, well structured too. keep it up, ur message came across well

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

761 Views
8 Reviews
Added on July 11, 2012
Last Updated on July 14, 2012

The Book of Experi-Mentals


Author

Wondering Mind
Wondering Mind

Canada



About
more..

Writing