Love Bites

Love Bites

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
"

not what it first seems

"

once bitten
twice
no thanks!

 

there are better ways
I believe

 

I’d rather befriend black-tips
and dance the deep
or
howl a full-moon song and long
with wolves


you see 

nature in its nature
does not betray or deceive



© 2012 Wondering Mind


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Wondering Mind
an old memory

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i guess the true person inevitably reveals itself as time goes by because your true nature will always come out. 'familiarity breeds contempt.'

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Indeed !

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not sure most of us have ever truly loved anyone, or have been truly loved.
We're involved in extended hook-ups, drawn-out infatuations, unadulterated lust fests and long-term house-playing. These experiences do familiarize us with copious amounts of both deceit and betrayal. What makes us expect better?
Folks gotta stay open to the possibility that something more closely approaching love is attainable.
I do agree that Nature's ways are, generally, much purer than most human interactions; the question is, are modern, urbanized, overly domesticated humans behaving like their natural selves, anymore?
Thoroughly enjoyed your intelligent, amusing, somewhat sarcastic and decidedly thought-provoking poem, WM.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Pax
it bites and leaves a mark forever there, love bites.

Posted 8 Years Ago


'love' is a hollow word; we fill it with our lopsided experiences, then point to it and say 'this is what love is'...aren't we funny

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

I think we're the funniest-strange species sharing this space-time realm..unless I discover a funnie.. read more
hmmm, tell that to the venus fly trap, or those crazy fish in the Nemo movie with the flash light worm on it's head...we'll need to call a foul...on those guys. what is a black-tips?

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

lol...black-tips are a type of shark

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