You

You

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
"

and still not answered

"

more eager exploration
than a practiced ritual

 

though it is a kiss or two away
from worship

or so it seems


each time a different journey

 

a deep discovery of those spots
that may give me answers
to the universal question

 

that is you



© 2012 Wondering Mind


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very earthy, sensual and poignant. must feel nice to have someone feels this way about you. whoever it is is a lucky person for having someone so mindful of you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


she /he probably doesn't even have the answers, I love that line "though it is a kiss or two away
from worship
or so it seems
each time a different journey
ah, love as God energy I thinks, worship, cool, I love this one :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh just perfectly lovely W.M. Much enjoyed....write on oh Bard!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

Hardly a bard, my friend, but thank you :)
how sweet..it's nice, actually, beautiful and romantically written

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

thank you, princess. I hope all is well with you :)
such a wonderful read

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
you two too

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

I know you take it personal when "you" is mentioned...Thank you :)
"...though it is a kiss or two away; from worship; or so it seems" This makes me reminisce the beauty of new love and the excitement of loving and learning each other. In those moments, it does seem as if the mysteries of life can be answered by the sheer force of passion. Relish it, friend, relish it...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

Thanks, my friend...I do..
The joy and bliss that comes from the excitement of a different journey taken each time.. with discovery unveiling the universal question.. is divine...in so many ways so many reasons.. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

The most exciting about it all is that the question remains unsolved...Thank you for reading, Lily .. read more
Lily Mae

8 Years Ago

I like that.. the never ending exploration..xo
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Pax
sweet words..

Posted 8 Years Ago


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God bless the inspiration of this work of art :) She's done good work of you!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

God bless you, lynn. Thank you!

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