Sadly

Sadly

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
"

it doesn't fit anymore

"

it is an old tune you sing

 

and though the new crowd
old and young
stop and listen to the song
in wonder

 

the one you sing to
has outgrown that number



© 2012 Wondering Mind


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sounds like me singing bubble gum to my friends, (my secret pleasure) and the people recognizing it and saying, she likes the songs we don't want to admit we like. that really happened. : )

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Pax
songs never grows old.

Posted 8 Years Ago


oooo, that was harsh, but you seem like a fair kind of guy so I'm gonna roll with it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

lol...thanks...I was being harsh on myself... :)
Corset

8 Years Ago

oh well then, that's ok..lololol
Ah yes, I like! Very good W.M.

Posted 8 Years Ago


So is life... things come, things go... and the ones, who keep on listening, are the ones we sing for, or write for... wonderful, for me this is no pain, but a clever keen sight to what is real. Amazing words. Excellent poem.

E.L.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ouch! That stings a bit. You can't do the same thing and engage in the same behaviors over and over and expect change... The realization of outgrowing love that can't evolve with the changes in climate that life brings. Excellent.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I've felt this way about alot of things in my life and I have walked away from or changed most of them now. Sometimes sad to leave, but sadder to stay.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

glad you walked away from what is sadder to stay with (was what I typed English?)
...

8 Years Ago

LMAO! I get it...that's all that matters!
Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

lol...just wanted to make sure..I'm not a native English (typer) :D
ahhh, the convicting 'you' i know so well

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

lol..I was waiting for that, ed..
Few know what lies behind the one with the voice. Their thoughts may run somewhere way back in memory.

Good write. Great thought.
Well written.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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