wondering minds

wondering minds

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
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an essence for the coming winds. 2 lines with six syllabeles each having both internal and ending rhyme

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Thoughts flow; minds in wonder.

Winds blow; trees surrender.



© 2010 Wondering Mind


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Wondering Mind
My opening write in here.

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Look at that, structured poems, wow and rhyming, i'm impressed :) very nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


your wondering mind is a beautiful gift

Posted 9 Years Ago


opening your mind to be present to the gift of the present...congrats :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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. ahhhh ... beautiful beyond measure ...

your mind is a treasure
and when you wonder
we wonder with you
and when you saunter
in the alleys
of your thoughts
we follow you around
and when you conclude
we conclude
a wondering mind
is god's gift
to mankind
and so are you

Posted 9 Years Ago


nicely done oh how i wish it would have continued but for something so short your voiced something most beautiful!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Adorable piece, meaningful and deep...

Posted 11 Years Ago


A painting in words; your words collide yet form concise shape and beauty.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reminder of an old song??? Thoughts flow - winds blow, ergo! The answer is blowing in the wind.
Lovely bijou poem. Don't have to think too hard but it conjures up 'pensive days enjoying gentle summer breezes'.

John



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this....
SO much said in so few words...Very pretty !

Lynda

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short poems can be the best. They leave so much for us to translate and that helps us find your true self. thank you for making such a poem. I see thoughts as the wind and the tree as our will.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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